Thanks for visiting my space and I enjoyed reading your poems. As I already stated I think your juxtaposition of light and dark is a motif of your originality. You are very gifted and guard against  words  denoted as "poetic."  Always strive for the orginal. I always say that to myself too.  :) and sometimes it works.

 

I am touched that you heard the feelings in my writing.

 

elise